Monday, November 2, 2009

RJA #10a: Thesis Statement

Research Question:
Is technology affecting education?

Precise claim:
The use of laptops and cellphones during class time is affecting learning.

Reasons/blueprint:
1- Texting or surfing the web instead of paying attention in class you will not learn what you are supposed to.
2- Not learning what you need to will affect your understanding of the subject and can lead to downfall in other classes.


Complete thesis statement:
The misuse of cellphones and laptops in classrooms can affect education, but they are very helpful and important tools and it is up to the individual user to properly use them.

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